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== The <nowiki>{{editintro}}</nowiki> template atop the main article page ==
 
The <nowiki>{{editintro}}</nowiki> template atop the article page should be removed prior approval. <small>...said</small> [[User:Chunbum Park|Chunbum Park]] ([[User_talk:Chunbum Park|talk]]) {{#if:13:13, 27 December 2007|13:13, 27 December 2007|}}
 
:It has now been removed. [[User:Milton Beychok|Milton Beychok]] 03:09, 21 June 2011 (UTC)


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==Exploration of the Moon==
==Exploration of the Moon==


Please explain why the Category "Exploration of the Moon" was removed. [[User:Charles F. Radley|Charles F. Radley]] 09:59, 22 September 2007 (CDT)
Please explain why the Category "Exploration of the Moon" was removed. [[User:Charles F. Radley|Charles F. Radley]] 09:59, 22 September 2007 (CDT)
:Probably because we now use work groups as our categories and there is no such work group. [[User:Milton Beychok|Milton Beychok]] 04:05, 20 June 2011 (UTC)
:Probably because we now use work groups as our categories and there is no such work group. [[User:Milton Beychok|Milton Beychok]] 04:05, 20 June 2011 (UTC)
==Documenting my recent edits==
This was originally a Wikipedia import created in April 2007. Although some people have edited it at various times in the past 4 years, it still contained much of the original content and formatting. I spent about 12-16 hours in CZ-ifying and improving it as documented below:
*'''''Main article:''''' Reformatted and updated all of the references as per the usual CZ style. Numerous small copy edits. Numerous wiki links revised, edited, expanded.
*'''''Related Articles subpage:''''' Re-formatted and added a good many related article links. Culled the bot-created links. Deleted inappropriate links.
*'''''Bibliography subpage:''''' Completely reformatted the existing bibliography so as to use the <nowiki>{{cite book}}</nowiki> template. Added one additional book to the bibliography subpage.
*'''''External Links subpage:''''' Checked each of the links on that subpage to be sure that they were all still active links.
*'''''Metadata template:''''' Entered language variant as AE. Revised cat check from "yes" to "no". Revised status from 4 (external import) to 2 (developing article). Added History and Engineering as "cats". Replaced Astronomy "cat" with Physics.
'''This article still needs a critical review by one of our knowledgeable History editors or authors.''' [[User:Milton Beychok|Milton Beychok]] 03:09, 21 June 2011 (UTC)

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 Definition A human spaceflight program undertaken by NASA during the years 1961–1975 with the goal of conducting manned moon landing missions. [d] [e]
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The {{editintro}} template atop the main article page

The {{editintro}} template atop the article page should be removed prior approval. ...said Chunbum Park (talk) 13:13, 27 December 2007

It has now been removed. Milton Beychok 03:09, 21 June 2011 (UTC)

Exploration of the Moon

Please explain why the Category "Exploration of the Moon" was removed. Charles F. Radley 09:59, 22 September 2007 (CDT)

Probably because we now use work groups as our categories and there is no such work group. Milton Beychok 04:05, 20 June 2011 (UTC)

Documenting my recent edits

This was originally a Wikipedia import created in April 2007. Although some people have edited it at various times in the past 4 years, it still contained much of the original content and formatting. I spent about 12-16 hours in CZ-ifying and improving it as documented below:

  • Main article: Reformatted and updated all of the references as per the usual CZ style. Numerous small copy edits. Numerous wiki links revised, edited, expanded.
  • Related Articles subpage: Re-formatted and added a good many related article links. Culled the bot-created links. Deleted inappropriate links.
  • Bibliography subpage: Completely reformatted the existing bibliography so as to use the {{cite book}} template. Added one additional book to the bibliography subpage.
  • External Links subpage: Checked each of the links on that subpage to be sure that they were all still active links.
  • Metadata template: Entered language variant as AE. Revised cat check from "yes" to "no". Revised status from 4 (external import) to 2 (developing article). Added History and Engineering as "cats". Replaced Astronomy "cat" with Physics.

This article still needs a critical review by one of our knowledgeable History editors or authors. Milton Beychok 03:09, 21 June 2011 (UTC)