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I was a minor contributor to the WP article. I have completely re-written, re-formatted and expanded the WP article before uploading it here into CZ. [[User:Milton Beychok|Milton Beychok]] 01:45, 4 February 2009 (UTC)
I was a minor contributor to the WP article. I have completely re-written, re-formatted and expanded the WP article before uploading it here into CZ. [[User:Milton Beychok|Milton Beychok]] 01:45, 4 February 2009 (UTC)
== I think you're wrong about "general common usage" ==
When you write in the lede: "in general common usage, concentration is" so-and-so, I won't dispute that a '''fairly''' common usage is something like "the concentration of orange juice concentrate to water is one to three" or whatever.
A '''more''' common usage, I would submit, is "Pancho Gonzales displayed other-worldly powers of concentration as he came back from two sets down to...."
"Concentration" (and "focus") are such cliches these days that one can hardly listen to a sporting event without being battered by them on a once-a-minute basis, or so it seems to me. [[User:Hayford Peirce|Hayford Peirce]] 01:54, 4 February 2009 (UTC)

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I was a minor contributor to the WP article. I have completely re-written, re-formatted and expanded the WP article before uploading it here into CZ. Milton Beychok 01:45, 4 February 2009 (UTC)

I think you're wrong about "general common usage"

When you write in the lede: "in general common usage, concentration is" so-and-so, I won't dispute that a fairly common usage is something like "the concentration of orange juice concentrate to water is one to three" or whatever.

A more common usage, I would submit, is "Pancho Gonzales displayed other-worldly powers of concentration as he came back from two sets down to...."

"Concentration" (and "focus") are such cliches these days that one can hardly listen to a sporting event without being battered by them on a once-a-minute basis, or so it seems to me. Hayford Peirce 01:54, 4 February 2009 (UTC)