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But I only got to the first paragraph, and i still think it | But I only got to the first paragraph, and i still think it | ||
sounds clunky. [[User:DavidGoodman|DavidGoodman]] 21:42, 2 November 2006 (CST) | sounds clunky. [[User:DavidGoodman|DavidGoodman]] 21:42, 2 November 2006 (CST) | ||
yes, still needs lots more work, but it's getting better.[[User:Nancy Sculerati MD|Nancy Sculerati MD]] 23:12, 2 November 2006 (CST) | |||
Revision as of 23:12, 2 November 2006
I changed some words again to what I think is clearer: affinity is 18th century, oxygen is Capital O , not zero, and apparently the familiar html markup works. But I only got to the first paragraph, and i still think it sounds clunky. DavidGoodman 21:42, 2 November 2006 (CST)
yes, still needs lots more work, but it's getting better.Nancy Sculerati MD 23:12, 2 November 2006 (CST)