Talk:Accidental release source terms/Draft

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I was the original creator and major contributor to the Wikipedia article. I have reworded parts of it and made a few other changes to make it suitable for Citizendium. Milton Beychok 19:03, 22 February 2008 (CST)

Looks ready for approval

I added a few related terms and started/updated some emergency management and decontamination. You may well know more about decontaminating fuel spills than I do; that's on the list.

Did you want to include any meteorological information?

I'd like to align the table of contents a bit, and there are a couple of sub-references whose formatting I'd like to examine. Personally, I like the 2-column reflist, but that's certainly your call.

Otherwise, are you happy with having it approved? I will be looking at some thing below it as well. You have no idea how pleasant it is to be reading this as a relief from homeopathy

Howard C. Berkowitz 17:43, 23 October 2008 (UTC)

Howard, I am thoroughly confused! Are you talking about approving this article? If so, I don't see where you made any of the changes you mentioned above.

Or are you talking about my approving the Incident Command System article?

Please clarify. Regards, Milton Beychok 18:01, 23 October 2008 (UTC)

Strange. They weren't there; perhaps I saved wrong.

Also, look at the line beginning "Whenever the ratio of the absolute source pressure to the absolute downstream ambient pressure is less than"... Just an exponent wraps into the next line. I am just learning math formatting and don't want to break anything. Howard C. Berkowitz 18:14, 23 October 2008 (UTC)