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Although I did not start Wikipedia (WP) article "Chemical plant", I wrote almost all of it myself. When I first came across the article, it was just a short stub. Since I wrote practically the whole article myself just the way I wanted to, of course I think it's written about as well as it could be; otherwise I would have written it differently. In this sense, I'm biased about how it's written. I wrote it in a fairly simple way so the average non-technical guy can understand it, and yet it mentions practically all the main fundamental points I want to mention. It would be ridiculous for me to rewrite an article that I mostly consider about as well written as it could be just to make it different for Citizendium (CZ). Since I wrote it, a few people have added a few things, and these additions are mostly good edits that I agree with. I would rather transfer those edits over to CZ as they are. Nevertheless, I am making a few edits that introduce some differences between the WP (as of Nov. 21, 2009) and future CZ versions. Besides the WP-specific categories, foreign language links, and "See also" section taken out of the WP version for CZ, these differences are listed here: | Although I did not start Wikipedia (WP) article "Chemical plant", I wrote almost all of it myself. When I first came across the article, it was just a short stub. Since I wrote practically the whole article myself just the way I wanted to, of course I think it's written about as well as it could be; otherwise I would have written it differently. In this sense, I'm biased about how it's written. I wrote it in a fairly simple way so the average non-technical guy can understand it, and yet it mentions practically all the main fundamental points I want to mention. It would be ridiculous for me to rewrite an article that I mostly consider about as well written as it could be just to make it different for Citizendium (CZ). Since I wrote it, a few people have added a few things, and these additions are mostly good edits that I agree with. I would rather transfer those edits over to CZ as they are. Nevertheless, I am making a few edits that introduce some differences between the WP (as of Nov. 21, 2009) and future CZ versions. Besides the WP-specific categories, foreign language links, and "See also" section taken out of the WP version for CZ, these differences are listed here: | ||
*took out image(s) not present in CZ | *took out image(s) not present in CZ; replaced them with pictures I found in CZ | ||
*reorganized/clarified parts of the introductory section | *reorganized/clarified parts of the introductory section (not finished yet) | ||
*moved a couple sentences from intro to a new subsection called "Location" | *moved a couple sentences from intro to a new subsection called "Location" | ||
*mentioned stirred tank reactors in CZ version | *mentioned stirred tank reactors in CZ version | ||
*mentioned lagging in CZ version | *mentioned lagging in CZ version | ||
*mentioned demonstration plants in CZ version | *mentioned demonstration plants in CZ version (refs yet to be added) | ||
*mentioned operating procedures in CZ version | *mentioned operating procedures in CZ version | ||
*some other minor rewording | *some other minor rewording | ||
*I may add something about hazards at chemical plants | *I may add something about hazards at chemical plants - yet to be done | ||
*perhaps look for a reference to add some day (I have to find it.) | *perhaps look for a reference to add some day (I have to find it.) - yet to be done | ||
* I will look for | *I will look for some pictures already present in CZ to add - done for now | ||
*create Definition and maybe other subpages - yet to be done | |||
*My plant engineering experience has been all in the [[United States]], so I am [somewhat] familiar with the statutory and regulatory compliance I mentioned in the article, but I admit my knowledge and coverage in the article is not worldwide, although elsewhere in the world, things would be somewhat similar. If anybody wants to expand this coverage to provide a worldwide view, they will have their chance once I move this article into an article space. | |||
[[User:Henry A. Padleckas|Henry A. Padleckas]] 19:46, 22 November 2009 (UTC) | [[User:Henry A. Padleckas|Henry A. Padleckas]] 19:46, 22 November 2009 (UTC) | ||
Revision as of 22:44, 22 November 2009
Talk page for: Chemical plant
Although I did not start Wikipedia (WP) article "Chemical plant", I wrote almost all of it myself. When I first came across the article, it was just a short stub. Since I wrote practically the whole article myself just the way I wanted to, of course I think it's written about as well as it could be; otherwise I would have written it differently. In this sense, I'm biased about how it's written. I wrote it in a fairly simple way so the average non-technical guy can understand it, and yet it mentions practically all the main fundamental points I want to mention. It would be ridiculous for me to rewrite an article that I mostly consider about as well written as it could be just to make it different for Citizendium (CZ). Since I wrote it, a few people have added a few things, and these additions are mostly good edits that I agree with. I would rather transfer those edits over to CZ as they are. Nevertheless, I am making a few edits that introduce some differences between the WP (as of Nov. 21, 2009) and future CZ versions. Besides the WP-specific categories, foreign language links, and "See also" section taken out of the WP version for CZ, these differences are listed here:
- took out image(s) not present in CZ; replaced them with pictures I found in CZ
- reorganized/clarified parts of the introductory section (not finished yet)
- moved a couple sentences from intro to a new subsection called "Location"
- mentioned stirred tank reactors in CZ version
- mentioned lagging in CZ version
- mentioned demonstration plants in CZ version (refs yet to be added)
- mentioned operating procedures in CZ version
- some other minor rewording
- I may add something about hazards at chemical plants - yet to be done
- perhaps look for a reference to add some day (I have to find it.) - yet to be done
- I will look for some pictures already present in CZ to add - done for now
- create Definition and maybe other subpages - yet to be done
- My plant engineering experience has been all in the United States, so I am [somewhat] familiar with the statutory and regulatory compliance I mentioned in the article, but I admit my knowledge and coverage in the article is not worldwide, although elsewhere in the world, things would be somewhat similar. If anybody wants to expand this coverage to provide a worldwide view, they will have their chance once I move this article into an article space.
Henry A. Padleckas 19:46, 22 November 2009 (UTC)