User:Chunbum Park/Sub/Homeopathy research

• 13:22, 6 October 2008 Gareth Leng 17:45, 6 October 2008 D. Matt Innis - D Matt Innis' edits were completely agreeable.
• 02:39, 7 October 2008 Howard C. Berkowitz 03:35, 7 October 2008 Dana Ullman

• "life energy," sometimes called a "vital force," which today is commonly referred to as a person's immune and defense system. - awkward grammar
• Due to their respect for the wisdom of the body - ambiguous.... how can a body have "wisdom"?
• small and specially prepared - unnecessary
• Again, mainstream medicine rejects this premise as unsupported by adequate clinical evidence, molecular biology, or both. - why was this deleted?
• when considering homeopathy as an intervention, but may be used to determine the need for more conventional approaches. vs are generally not essential for selecting a homeopathic remedy, but may be used for medical disease diagnosis. - I find the original sentence more descriptive & sensible. "medical diesase diagnosis" is ambiguous.
• , which he feels will be more effective. - Why add this? Awkward grammar, incorrect gender; should be s/he, & it's confusing. I'm trying to figure out if it means anything substantial but I can't.

I think these are reasonable considerations. D. Matt Innis 02:46, 19 November 2008 (UTC)